Pisownia w małym wypracowaniu z angielskiego,ktoś może sprawdzić?

Pisownia w małym wypracowaniu z angielskiego,ktoś może sprawdzić?

Moglibyście mi ktoś sprawdzić czy wszystko jest dobrze? z góry dziękuję

She was the Queen of England and the Emperor of India.She was born in 24 may 1819 and she died in 22 january 1901,from House of Hanover.Queen of England for 63 years.Her control started in 20 June 1837(England),and 01 january 1877.There were 3 attempts on her life.Her husband died in 14 december 1861.She plumbed in nearly pernament mourning.Victoria was wearing only black,for the rest of her life.She married in 10 fabruary 1840 with her first cousin, Prince Albert of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha.Their nine children married into royal and noble families across the continent, tying them together and earning her the nickname "the grandmother of Europe".Her reign of 63 years and seven months, which is longer than that of any other British monarch and the longest of any female monarch in history, is known as the Victorian era.